Your blog is set out really well, it is clear and easy to read and all of your points are made clear. I thought you started every paragraph really well which kept up the anticipation of your text, whether it was a rhetorical question like in the 2nd paragraph "Let me ask you this, how do we expect to live in a peaceful world when our justice system is so flawed with violence?" or how in the 2nd to last paragraph you have introduced a story about the 3 men convicted of murder, they all intrigued me to keep reading. It is really well written and I like how you have included a variety of images rather than just sticking to physical images you have also used graphs which made it more interesting as well.
WOW, I absolutely agree! I've always agreed and you've just put forward all the reasons why I disagree with death penalties and so much more! Moreover you put forward a very convincing, strong and clear argument. I knew what you were saying and your reasoning was good.
Your blog is set out really well, it is clear and easy to read and all of your points are made clear. I thought you started every paragraph really well which kept up the anticipation of your text, whether it was a rhetorical question like in the 2nd paragraph "Let me ask you this, how do we expect to live in a peaceful world when our justice system is so flawed with violence?" or how in the 2nd to last paragraph you have introduced a story about the 3 men convicted of murder, they all intrigued me to keep reading. It is really well written and I like how you have included a variety of images rather than just sticking to physical images you have also used graphs which made it more interesting as well.
ReplyDeleteWOW, I absolutely agree! I've always agreed and you've just put forward all the reasons why I disagree with death penalties and so much more! Moreover you put forward a very convincing, strong and clear argument. I knew what you were saying and your reasoning was good.
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