Final Draft

-She arrives and meets the beast (the beast is the prince and people know that he is under a spell) and falls in love
-2 stepsisters tries to stop her from ruining anything. Cinderella gets mad and freezes the 2 sisters and the others around.
-The beast kiss makes her just in time which made Cinderella nice and charming, and made the beast turn back in to a handsome prince
- and ~ Lives happily ever after :)


Once upon a time there was a sweet young girl named Cinderella. She was an ordinary girl in an ordinary family until she lost her mother. Her father met a kind lady from a neighbourhood town during his time of work and brought her home with her two daughters, Cinderella did not like them, however, tried her best for her loving father. Few month later Cinderella lost her father as well. She felt she lost everything she cared in the world and the kindness she had turned in to hatred.

Cinderella would wake up late in a big dark room with no light. She never opened the curtains after her parents death. She would walk out of her room, eat her breakfast, go out to town for shopping and come back for dinner.

Years pass and Cinderella turned eighteen, her anger and sadness were put through to her step sisters.

"Cinderella, would you mind doing the dishes?" asked the kind step mother.

"Of course step mother." she replied with a fake smile on her face.

Her step mother gave her a back warm smile and walked out of the room with the laundry.

"Girl's! Get in here!... NOW!" She summoned her step sisters like they were servants.

"Do the dishes for me would you? I do not want to get my beautiful hands in the soaking water... and you also know what happens to your precious dresses IF you disobey me... yes?" Cinderella was holding a dress on one hand and scissors on the other. The sisters could not resist and did the dishes.

This happened anytime Cinderella had her chores around the house and it was not going to change anytime soon.

...

-knock knock-
The stepmother opened the door gently and greeted the person that came.

"The King and Queen has invited you and your daughters to the loyal ball to seek for a Princess" says the visitor.

Cinderella and the step sisters over heard the visitor talking and ran across the hall to read the invitation.

The people in town had a rumor. A rumor that the prince was a beast, cursed when he was young by an evil witch. When he gets his true loves kiss, he will turn back in to a human. However, citizens did not care because the rumor also say that the beast has a personality soft as a feather.

"Girls... patient... please." Stepmother laughed in a lovely voice but the girls could not take their eyes off the letter and pushed each other away to have each of their turn to read it.

The girls ran into each of their rooms to get changed to shop for new dresses for the ball.

...

They were walking down store to store to find the perfect dress.

"I want something pink." said one of the step sisters.

"I want yellow! What about you Cinderella?" said the other.
 
"Something that is better than both of yours. hmph" she stated and walked off.

As time passed the step sisters found their dresses, however, Cinderella was still looking for her perfect dress.

"We have to go home now Cinderella... All the shops are closing and it is getting dark." said the step sisters in a careful voice.

"O, we are going back since you two have your dresses? Too tired after all those time looking for yours and don't have the time to find mine?!?" Cinderella growled at them.

"We were hunting for your dress for hours..." said one

"I do not want to hear it. I'll find mine myself." Cinderella walked off to the next store.

"Should we wait...?" said the other

"No... She will go on for ages..."

...

Cinderella was still looking for her perfect dress until no store let her in because of the closing time.

"How rude. They don't want my money? Selfish of them." Cinderella had to walk home with nothing but sore feet.

As she arrived home she felt embarrassed because she was unable to find her dress. She walked in quietly in to her room and cried. "Only if mother was here..." she hoped, lying on her bed looking above she wished something good happened for her until she found an entrance to the attic above her room. With a sneeze, she found a familiar box covered by dust, she brought it down to her room and opened the box.

"O, wow..." She rubbed her eyes and blink couple of times.

"I cannot believe it! Yes! This is it! Thank you mother, thank you!" She was filled with joy for the first time in years.
She found her mothers gorgeous dress and she remembered her mother saying "When you grow older, I will give this to you as your birthday present."
Cinderella was able to sleep comfortably and her mind was filled with happiness rather than hatred.
...

Cinderella woke up in the morning and opened her curtains. Her mind was bright and had a warm smile on her face. She went over to the dining room to great her step mother and sisters. The step sisters were curious about her perfect dress that Cinderella was complaining about because she was all lovely and bright, they asked nicely if they could see the dress. Cinderella took them up to her room and showed them the dress.

"O wow, Cinderella this is lovely" said one

"It is gorgeous..." said the other.

Both step sisters were holding on to the dress very tightly and recklessly fought over to hold on to the dress.

"If you do not mind sister. I will hold on to it first." said one

"No. I will thank you very much."

 They were pulling and tugging on to the dress like a rope...

 "Stop it!" Cinderella shouted

...and ripped the dress apart.

The room was filled with silence, the step sisters were able to fill the anger and shock of Cinderella's reaction. Cinderella yelled and screamed and pushed the both sisters on to the ground.

"How dare you! My mothers dress!" She shouted with anger,

Her step mother ran up to Cinderella's room and shouted "Stop!"

Cinderella was just about to slap her sisters.

"What is going on here?" Step mother asked with a disappointing look on her face.

"They... They ripped my mothers dress!" Cinderella cried with anger and sorrow

The step mother was told what has happened and she came to a decision.

"Cinderella. I am grounding you from going to the ball."

"What? Come again?" Cinderella was shocked.

"This is not just about the actions you have made today but also all these years you been making your sisters do all your chores and threatening them. Yes, I seen it all. We will put this all behind after the ball." Step mother stated very clearly.

...

The day of the loyal ball Cinderella was locked inside her room.
She was crying, screaming and shouting, thinking of her past when she had her parents.
Then. *poof* three fairies dresses in blue, green and pink came to help her to go to the ball. Cinderella was grateful. So grateful that she grabbed the 3 wands and put the fairies in to the cage and prepared herself for the loyal ball.

"O dear." the three fairies were worried,

They put a spell on her eyes, a spell so that what she sees as a beast will appear as a handsome prince.

"The wand cannot stay away from us for long. Only till midnight your free." warned the blue fairy

...


She heads to the ball with the three wands. She plans a way to ruin the ball.